Thursday, 21 October 2010

When Your Musings Stop

       When my words tremble on my lips,
               When I sit and wait for words to appear,
I fail and hope for the next day,
To be better and words to fill up
My empty spaces.

Day by day I sit next to the chair
All my words left unfinished.
I write, I try and again I fail.
My muse has left me and I feel

Words just simply don't flow out.
Am stuck and my lyrics have stopped


Hiyaa said...

Needs a bit of trim to tighten it up for more impact. Use punctuations and avoid the 'I's . The imagery is stunning.

shubhankarm said...

Liked the poetry and especially the thought. Keep writing more.